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Permalink Reply by Arthur Davenport on March 2, 2011 at 2:02am

Arthur Davenport submits a Cowboy Country song for the genre of Alt-Western. Thanksamillion for snipes, gripes, cheers and tips!  Click on Song Four, "Lonesome Cowboy" here at Acoustic Roundtable:

 

Arthur at Acoustic Roundtable

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Permalink Reply by Heather Catalena on March 14, 2011 at 1:22pm
Permalink Reply by Acoustic Roundtable on March 14, 2011 at 1:30pm
Love it!  Almost reminds me of Stevie Nicks in a way.... Dog & Butterfly....
Permalink Reply by Jimmy Dan on March 15, 2011 at 11:38am

I would appreciate feedback on my new song, "I Turn To You."

 

Permalink Reply by Acoustic Roundtable on March 15, 2011 at 11:48am

Jimmy D.

 

Great song concept and simple lyrics with meaning and depth.  The current recording as it is needs a little more polished vocal recording something in a professional studio environment without the echo would be a huge plus.  The lyrics as written are a little out place meaning that they don't match what's being heard...you may want to go back and check those again. 

 

I have a few more thoughts that I'd love to share with you if you're open to talking about them via email or chat.  I definitely think the song has great potential and would love to hear a few revised versions as you hash it out.

 

I can be reached via email at acousticroundtable@gmail.com if you want some more insight. 

 

Thanks for the post.

 

A.W.

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Permalink Reply by Andrew Corbett on August 21, 2011 at 12:42pm
Really nice song.  Great idea and appealing, simple lyrics and melody. Perfect example of "less is more". 

Jimmy D said:

I would appreciate feedback on my new song, "I Turn To You."

 

Permalink Reply by Andrew Corbett on August 21, 2011 at 1:09pm
I like the guitar work and melody.  Lyrics don't catch me so much.  

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Permalink Reply by Orly & Yagel on August 22, 2011 at 7:43pm
Boy on A Hill - Orly Forman & Yagel Sulchiner

http://www.myspace.com/orlyforman

http://orlymusic.bandcamp.com/

look for the song in those site
Permalink Reply by Orly & Yagel on August 22, 2011 at 7:44pm
Options - Orly Forman & Yagel Sulchiner

http://orlymusic.bandcamp.com/

look for the song in thise site
Permalink Reply by The Dirtmen on August 23, 2011 at 11:01am


Jimmy, the versing is a bit tough. Great content and message, a bit tough to follow though.

 

P. Sullivan - The Dirtmen 

Permalink Reply by Jimmy Dan on August 27, 2011 at 7:09am

I really appreciate that. Thanks.


Andrew Corbett said:

Really nice song.  Great idea and appealing, simple lyrics and melody. Perfect example of "less is more". 

Jimmy D said:

I would appreciate feedback on my new song, "I Turn To You."

 

Permalink Reply by Jimmy Dan on August 27, 2011 at 7:10am
Fair enough.

The Dirtmen said:


Jimmy, the versing is a bit tough. Great content and message, a bit tough to follow though.

 

P. Sullivan - The Dirtmen 

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